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Meaningless Trash
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 06:59:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It was a shame
An inescapable reality
It struck with force
And caused
This heart to go soft
This brain tossed
In its skull cavity
Back and forth as I walk
It is the truth
Overcome with passion
Inspired by possibility
Taken to extremes
And brought back with a crash
A soaking bath
Separating love
From lust
From trash
________
____
Copyright ©
jyssvw22
... [
2007-01-05 06:59:20]
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Re: Meaningless Trash
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by lost_chadow on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 12:42:07 PM AEST
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| Aye, it really can be hard to separate those who want to love you from those who just want a piece. |
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Re: Meaningless Trash
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by brew on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 09:04:19 PM AEST
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Wow......what a power write for one........Straight from a saddened heart.....yet.......Hmmmm......I loved it...Hope it works to what you need and want.....I have guy friends, and well...they say....well you know what they say......Well always a pleasure to read anything you post...
Happy New yrs.....
Brew~ |
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Re: Meaningless Trash
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 12:29:16 AM AEST
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..what an absolutely inspiring title line jyss..lol
your emotions run deep my friend..
I guess it would be needless to mention
(but I will) that I've had my very own private revelation regarding the final 4 lines..lol
but I digress..lol
great work friend~
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