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Eyes of an angel part 2

Contributed by Craze on Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 07:13:55 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Sick of the fact that my birthparents walked out this is one hell of a drought one thing dieng after another sick and ashamed of my own mother sick of people telling me how she self destructed and how her problems erupted onto me wounderin when ill be free of this agony that is dragin me as this pain is burnin me to a dangerous degree wounderin if ill ever be free while these memories are killin me

A little boy sitting on the ground inside yelling for help but instead his drunk father brings out a belt
Noone stopped and thought about how he might of felt
Poor child look at the hand he was delt
But as he gets older his emotions begin to melt...away
He takes things day by day
His heart begins to decay
There dosen't seem to be a ray of hope at the end of the finishline for him no his ending seems alittle grim
If anything his ending is dim
His cup of anger has been filled to the brim and is about to overflow but noone will ever know about the kid who could shine if onle people would let him glow
He spoke the truth from his heart and his soul as he cried these tears from the eyes of an angel




Copyright © Craze ... [ 2007-01-04 19:13:55]
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Re: Eyes of an angel part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 08:36:06 AM AEST
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Another good poem.. Painful and sad.. It is always good to get things out though they can be really painful... It is like therapy... But no one needed me to say that... This was a very painful poem...

Take care
*hugs*
Christina


Re: Eyes of an angel part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by lipsofanangel on Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 01:07:54 PM AEST
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max you are going to make me cry. Ill let you shine. you know that.
i love you still
ali


Re: Eyes of an angel part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Craze on Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 09:37:53 AM AEST
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as i look at this poem and re read it in my head it makes me realize how gifted i am and how appreciative i am of a gift such as this one we all have gifts we have the gift that believe it or not many people can comprehend or duplicate its easy to read poetry but try reading it with sincere emotion not many can truly use words to paint emotional pictures this is as people may say a true blessing


Re: Eyes of an angel part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 09:15:57 PM AEST
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well. that was depressing. but also very good.
here's an imaginary hug i'm sending you ok? pretend you feel it =]




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