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Frantic the Spirit
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 01:59:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Frantic the spirit
That spews out bile
Rotting timeframes
Gliding sorrows
Flying forth
From soul
Wraths fire
Eyes aglow
Gentle heart
Turned and twisted
Away from
Tender hand
Hell’s fire
Angel’s death
As window
Splintered pane
Frantic the spirit
Hoping to regain
Shades of joy
Inner triumph
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NoSaint
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2007-01-04 13:59:01]
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Re: Frantic the Spirit
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 08:29:10 PM AEST
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The dualities dance in this piece...forces of light and dark, terror and tenderness... really good job.
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Frantic the Spirit
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by shelby on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 08:37:50 AM AEST
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I agree with AJ, alot cn be threaded between the lines in this write my friend. It touches alot of bases.
love ya
Michelle |
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Re: Frantic the Spirit
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 08:16:03 AM AEST
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I can actually see the strife and anguish......and perhaps the hope too.
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Re: Frantic the Spirit
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 11:29:06 AM AEST
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| Very nicely written piece. |
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