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Soap Bubbles
Contributed by
Winterland
on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 09:31:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Through the darkest hours
words reached through
to calm and comfort.
Like a child’s soap bubble
you gently blew
the hope towards me.
I watched it grow,
glistening
in its rainbow of colors
until it was all
I could see before me
bobbing, dancing, twirling
in the gentle breeze of uncertainty.
I allowed it
to fill my heart,
to lift me up a hundred miles
and I laughed with the joy.
Through the rainbow colors
swirling before my eyes,
I could see your words coming.
My bubble of hope
was not enough to shield me
from your message of reality.
With the deafening pop
still ringing through my soul,
I crashed back into the darkness.
Copyright ©
Winterland
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2007-01-04 09:31:28]
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Re: Soap Bubbles
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 11:15:34 AM AEST
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I like how you creatively put this into words.. sometimes everyone can lose hope at a bad point in their lives. but we must keep that lil bit of hope in order to carry on.. I really liked the wording used in this piece great job
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Re: Soap Bubbles
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by strawberryshortcake on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 11:33:54 AM AEST
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| interesting write. must admit the title made me think of my granddaughter watching some bubbles just the other day. so that inspired me to write a poem about her. thanks! as for the crashing and despair you speak of, remember in every dark place there is a light leading the way out. |
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