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Moments lost
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 12:51:36 AM in AEST
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There is a reason
I need
something to believe in
what it is I don't know,
do I want love
or is it
just another drug,
confusions come on strong
Illusions
ebb and flow
and they last to long.
I walk into a crowd
mingle and giggle
trying not to be bored,
as someones talking
I pretend to listen...
I do it
because I don't wanna be Ignored.
As I flow
I suddenly stop
and get this mental feeling
cause
Ive forgotten
what I was talking for.
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unknown_utopia
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2007-01-04 00:51:36]
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Re: Moments lost
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by DeepaliDoshi on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 03:03:30 AM AEST
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| at some point everyone feels like this... its amazing you could put it to words |
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Re: Moments lost
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 03:37:43 AM AEST
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Uhhuh tony,
sendmesomeofthat.
big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Moments lost
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 10:55:55 PM AEST
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Ya know I had a really big and insightful comment but it slipped right out my brain... I look forward to Moments Regained...
Really Good Job
Peace
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Re: Moments lost
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:09:05 PM AEST
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a powerful introduction in those first lines more than just poetry there's a lot of mystery going on between the lines of life and love. a good comunicative style you have.
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Re: Moments lost
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 05:03:24 PM AEST
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Whether I walk among people or among trees I always ask who, what am I in relation to this.
As to what we really want. I think life has set us free to discover this as we journey through.
I enjoyed this piece as it questions not only you but anyone reading what the moment we are in means to us.Thank you |
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