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Cadence
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 12:46:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Aurora nights.
portal to nowhere
dulled forever
tormented eyes.
Feed on nothing
don`t throw me away,
backed-up to sorrow
Mended on prayer.
Like me for my wisdom
the ending first,
tasteless reminders
burnt dreams.
Dark and silent
Crystal clear,
never or forever
Platinum web.
Minute to minute
pick a soul,
chronic cadence
asks a toll.
The bargains anguish
all fit the bill,
immaculate hands
thread-bare ends...... Shari~Crow
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2007-01-04 00:46:37]
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Re: Cadence
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 02:33:33 AM AEST
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| this seems almost like...word association..pretty. |
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Re: Cadence
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by shelby on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 03:26:52 AM AEST
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Yea!! This rocks you two did well with this one.
Michelle |
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Re: Cadence
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by Clarity_Rising on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 12:12:03 PM AEST
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I really like the flow of this poem.
Great word choice and descriptions!
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