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Irreplaceable whispers
Contributed by
blindchoice
on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 08:01:08 PM in AEST
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Rip out my IV
Pump 60 ml of air into my blood
And kill me
Cause I can’t stand
The nothingness in your face
As you hold my hand
Fighting off the doctors
As the tie me down
And fly me away in the helicopter
Cut out the threads
And stop pumping
In my meds
Let my blood spill on the floor
Seep across the room
And out the door
Nurses and patients
Drag it across the carpet
And stain it
They will never forget
The things they said
And what they will regret
So as you rip out my IV
giving the medication
That won’t kill me
I look into your eyes
And see the nothingness
As you whisper goodbye
Copyright ©
blindchoice
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2007-01-03 20:01:08]
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Re: Irreplaceable whispers
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 08:39:31 PM AEST
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Re: Irreplaceable whispers
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 02:41:10 PM AEST
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its kinda creepy and sad...but at the same time if it was based off a dream there's gotta be a hidden meaning.....
i think at least part of it is that the person who killed you in your dream was tryign to save you...
it might seem a nightmare...but i think its tryign to say that he/she would do anythign for you to ease your pain...even if it means killing you or lettign you go as in this case...
it's kinda creepy on the surface but it's a very deep poem...good job!
thx for the comment too! :-)
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