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Sleeping With A Ghost
Contributed by
Channing
on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 07:42:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Is that you?
The cold air hovering
Within my room
Please, please say it’s you
Oh, I miss you so
Is that you?
The sweet smell
Residing on the pillow
Next to mine
A scent long forgotten
Is that you?
The sorrowful touch I feel
Caressing my cheek
Easing me into a deep sleep
Losing touch with reality
Is that you?
Oh god, please say it’s you
For I have missed you
My love
Since your earthly depart
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
... [
2007-01-03 19:42:49]
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Re: Sleeping With A Ghost
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 10:30:19 PM AEST
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| awww..sad, but expressed well. |
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Re: Sleeping With A Ghost
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 11:35:07 AM AEST
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wow very well put into words.. makes you feel like a ghost is in the room with you.. and I love the twist at the end..
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Sleeping With A Ghost
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by GAMEchief on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 08:31:47 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry you have to go through that... |
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Re: Sleeping With A Ghost
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by mazeof_darkness on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 12:23:56 AM AEST
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| So sad......... I'm sorry to hear what you went through. Still a wonderful write. *Hugs* |
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