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DrowningHeart
Contributed by
DrowningHeart
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Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 03:37:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I've been held captive
and cant escape.
The demons within my head.
There all around me
creating visions of pain.
suffering, struggling
I remain a drowning heart
inundated in pool of tears.
Commotion, devotion I notion.
Release me
There crawling, I cringe,
like magots within my skin.
no tunnel, no light
no end to my plight.
Copyright ©
DrowningHeart
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2007-01-03 15:37:05]
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Re: DrowningHeart
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 05:02:44 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful piece.. i like the beginning especially.. awesome job on this piece.
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Re: DrowningHeart
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 08:09:51 PM AEST
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Incredibly written and welcome.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: DrowningHeart
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 08:22:12 PM AEST
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Oh the depths of darkness...
An excellent dark write my friend,
Well done
Larry |
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Re: DrowningHeart
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 12:41:40 PM AEST
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Quite a beautiful peice of poetry, second only to your ability to present such a compelling
and vivid presentation. Most enjoyable.
Also thank you kindly for your coment.
myheartsvoice |
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Re: DrowningHeart
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by needledancing on
Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 11:22:45 PM AEST
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| A very deep and vivid write that reveals much about your sensitive and deep heart. My thanks. |
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