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Child beater
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 01:37:19 PM in AEST
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I met your son today and I noticed that he has bruises on his skin.
You've been beating on him but you won't do it again.
I was in shock, I couldn't believe what I saw.
You've beat him time and time again and I just called the law.
Your son had tears in his eyes when he said that you beat his mama too.
I was shocked when he said that even after all you've done, he still loves you.
You are disgusting and you've put your family through hell.
But you won't do it again because you'll be in jail.
Beating on your wife and son was a terrible thing to do.
You are a coward and your family will be better off without you.
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randyjohnson
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2007-01-03 13:37:19]
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Re: Child beater
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 02:40:31 PM AEST
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i like it...but i almost think that it would be better if it wasn't fictional - if you had the emotion and pain to go along with it.
but - it's still very good...and things like this that happen are sad. bad, evil people - but what can you do?
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Re: Child beater
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by Shadows_In_The_Darkness on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 08:31:59 PM AEST
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| Great write. Me and my 2 sons just came out of that situation, it's nice to know that there are real people out there who care enough to write and talk about this epidemic (Domestic Violence) and feel something should be done about it! |
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