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Cold Around the World
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 10:53:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Cold and cloudy throughout the world these days
Songs of love and peace seem lost in a haze
I feel alone trudging up the hill
knuckles dragging; so much pain I feel
Our ways of tenderness seem obsolete
Wars are started and so the bombs defeat
Tears rolling down my tired and beaten face
Movies played, pictures of folks all misplaced
Children seeing death and destruction
Only grow and are succumbed by the influxion
Where do we start where does it end
Unsure anymore who is foe and who is friend
Disbelief infests me so much like a disease
Killing and maiming by humans with ease
Please Please
Tell me it will all go away
The hate the trauma the cold dark days
Will humans ever see the light
Or will they continue to cut throats in delight
Hang a man for his said crimes
Who's hanging for all the other's who've died?
Laura Horner
written 1-1-07
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2007-01-03 10:53:06]
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Re: Cold Around the World
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 11:49:35 AM AEST
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wow laurabean!! such powerful and truthful words about the world .. right on sister!! you put things into words so perfectly.. awesome job!!
peace and hope
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Re: Cold Around the World
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 01:27:17 PM AEST
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"...just a world that we all must share
it's not enough just to stand & stare...
Is it only a dream that there'll be no more turnin' away..."
~ Pink Floyd
Your words scream the answer, "No!"
Thank you so much for not turnin' away...our world needs us to care!
Keep passin' the peace pipe, sis!!!
~Me |
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Re: Cold Around the World
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 02:00:29 PM AEST
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DH .. this was so powerful and sad, sis ..
I feel ya ~
and I wish there was a way to end suffering .. so much
hatred exists in the world. And that makes for a terrifying
and lonely existence ..
much love and peace to you, hun
~Breezy |
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Re: Cold Around the World
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 09:46:24 PM AEST
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Written on a the poets battlefield this piece is highly evocative and reminds me to teach my young not go off to a 'Cream Puff War'
Peace
AJ |
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Re: Cold Around the World
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 11:00:46 PM AEST
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"wiping away tears) today I was in a forum and we were all talking about war and the men who have died..someone mentioned that we seem to forget the Iraqui men. It does seem hopeless Laura..I feel defeated sometimes..
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Re: Cold Around the World
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 11:13:06 PM AEST
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Hi friend,
This is an awesome write!
Great work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Cold Around the World
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by shelby on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 12:47:56 AM AEST
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He is a very kind and wise man as well as a good friend. THis captured many feeling within my heart. Keep sending the word, collectivly we all may do something for the good sis.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Cold Around the World
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by trueecho on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 11:48:55 AM AEST
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Bush in '08!!
just kidding..aint no time to hate
Mike |
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Re: Cold Around the World
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by CuriousitysCat on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 10:23:53 AM AEST
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I can really find feeling and if not comfort but uneasy solice in this poem. Relief in the knowledge that there are people out there who feel so strongly about this topic. I am reallly happy you put this on here as I am with your other poems. Another great poem by mizz deadheadpoet.
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~JaZz |
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