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The Genius of Dancin' Fools...
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 12:24:33 AM in AEST
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THE GENIUS OF DANCING FOOLS...
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Although, even the fools among us know~
one can't simply reach into the night & touch a star
This seemingly basic fact has not deterred~
the wisest among us, from their attempts thus far...
Yet to this end I find within most of us~
left between their contrasting extremes to reside
An arrogance which allows us to presume~
the judgement of madman from genius in disguise...
And so unto each apart from the others~
comes this question which begs individual answer
If before those who deny hearing music~
could you reveal your own truth as a dancer...
Might, I have this dance...Sweet Prince?
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~Me
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MisfitMe
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2007-01-03 00:24:33]
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Re: The Genius of Dancin' Fools...
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 07:37:53 AM AEST
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To dance beneath the stars would be a magnificent feeling. You have written this with such great wonder and amazement. May I have the next dance. lol
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Re: The Genius of Dancin' Fools...
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 11:08:33 AM AEST
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Kerry, I love this. I could write loads about this wondrous thing called Dancing. It is like an art and the folks are the colors spinning across the canvas. Damn, this takes me to a show. Tie-Dye everywhere, kind folks....good smells wafting through the air. Ahhhh can I come and dance along. I'd love to shake my bones with the two of you. *wink*
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Re: The Genius of Dancin' Fools...
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 01:05:26 PM AEST
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| Dancing oh yes, I am but a fool who dances, maybe that is why I am slightly mad.Good write, Enjoyed it immensley. Sue xx |
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Re: The Genius of Dancin' Fools...
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 02:38:50 PM AEST
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awesome write.. I loved the flow and the layout.. thanks for sharing
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Re: The Genius of Dancin' Fools...
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 09:57:18 PM AEST
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A hand of text extends
fingers fit the palm
a precision of grace
unfurls
as wind and breeze
catch the breath
to sail to bright stars
in dark night...
Aw shucks...(a kid blushes, turns and kicks a can)
AJ
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Re: The Genius of Dancin' Fools...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 04:04:11 PM AEST
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I can tell ya, Missy, I ain't no sweet prince, but may I have a dance anyway? Marvelous write 'n' wonderful read. So beautifful.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: The Genius of Dancin' Fools...
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 07:02:51 PM AEST
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wow, this one i'm leaving alone and just enjoy the inherent beauty of it. Wonderfuly done again. A magnificent murel of innocence.
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