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Shallowness sometimes takes over
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 08:24:12 PM in AEST
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Thus one can try to be shallow, but why?
Do they use it to hide...
Do they want to make others say; A waste of time
I dont belive so
I feel people take what is hurt...and pretend
Pretense of being, nothing...
Knowing that all can be there but, scareness prevails
SO they go in denile
They make one feel remorse
They tease and go on
Why can't they just....Love
It can happen
If for only....a brief moment
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Re: Shallowness sometimes takes over
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 11:17:48 PM AEST
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| I definitely agree. Well done! |
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Re: Shallowness sometimes takes over
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 01:57:04 PM AEST
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Hey Dayna girl!! Well said hun!
There are those who purposely manipulate feelings
and a situation to their own liking, by feigning emotions and what
all else .. and then there are those who (out of fear or doubt
etc.), have trouble articulating just how much those they love mean
to them. When we encounter that type of person, we need to
offer what compassion and understanding we can .. even if it
means our own small sacrifices ..
Those that would inflict pain purposely to ease their own
deflated egos .. well, they deserve our understanding and
compassion too .. but not to the point that we allow them to hurt
us.
I hope you get everything you wish and hope for in 2007
sweets -- for surely you deserve happiness and love.
Hope your Christmas was special
and you New Year, bright and happy. :)
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Shallowness sometimes takes over
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:10:02 PM AEST
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This piece is on the forefront of dealing with sociopaths and it delivers the universal message of Love...
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Shallowness sometimes takes over
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by feralpen on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 04:19:24 PM AEST
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| Your write shows great depth and insight. My personal feeling is, that people don't want to be shallow... it's just easier to be crass than to get involved or show compassion. Your poem takes a provocative look at this and offers the universal solution... if we would just obey. Very well written. |
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Re: Shallowness sometimes takes over
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 05:40:47 PM AEST
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Tottaly awesome as usual you have struck a chord of harmonious truth and reinforced it with wisdom beyond your years,
Why can't they just....Love . . . what and miss the joy of making other people miserable, u know dayna, if you asked them to spell love, they'd probably spell it as follow's . . . HATE.
perhaps they were brought up thinking that word is what love is about. Be that as it may,
A very lovely and deep insightful write. Think about it, if love starts in the home, then that's where they learned about it. Keep up the great work.u rock.
Ben
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Re: Shallowness sometimes takes over
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 04:49:40 AM AEST
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| LOVE IS WHERE YOU FIND WHAT IS TRUELY IN YOUR HEART |
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