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Tired of everything
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 02:35:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Tired of fighting
tired of crying
tired of dying... inside
its time to give up
it's time to give in
give in to emptiness
Tired of believing
Tired of having faith
Tired of needing..
needing you
It's time to stop trying
it's time to stop feeling
it's time to stop..
stop giving all of me
Tired of living
tired of breathing
tired of surviving..
surviving in this hell hole world
...its time to die..
Jenni
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Re: Tired of everything
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 09:43:42 PM AEST
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Just don't get tired of writting. Nice presentation as well as convincing.
And thank you for the comment.
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Re: Tired of everything
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 01:35:13 PM AEST
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This is good, I have felt this way sometimes, but never for long, Here is my answer poem, don't be offended by it, just think it should be answered. Sue xx
Fighting is pointless,
Crying is hopeless,
Its time to start living--Again
Never give up,
Never give in
Never lose faith--It is strength
Don't stop believing,
Never tire of faith,
Needing is healthy
It shows you have a heart
Don't stop trying,
Don't stop feeling,
Never ever stop,
You have much to give,
Never tire of living,
Never tire of breathing,
Never tire of surviving,
Surviving is believing in yourself,
Its time to believe you are worth it |
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Re: Tired of everything
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 02:32:23 PM AEST
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Jenn .. this was awesome! (and thanks for the author's
note .. might have been worried otherwise)
I think many souls go through this emotional despondency ..
at one time or another .. but hopefully they have a means
to work through it and process those emotions so
they don't get the better of them.
Excellent portrayal of hopelessness hun.
~Breezy |
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Re: Tired of everything
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by Clarity_Rising on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:41:06 PM AEST
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I’m glad this poem is not
about your own feelings,
but I’m sure many people
can relate to these depressive
thoughts. Another excellent write!
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Re: Tired of everything
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 05:48:39 AM AEST
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i know this feeling well. good poem, very well written.
thanks for the review btw. |
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