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Droplets
Contributed by
Oreo_kisses
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Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 01:44:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Rain drops falling
Tears sliding down
A young girl’s cheek
As she watches from her step
The lightening flashes before her
Not being scared to cry
Knowing her tears
Would be masked
By the rain droplets
For during the storm
Was the only time
Others could see her fall
No one realized she was not strong
She was never scared to show her vulnerability to anyone
Since no one seemed to notice
She masked her weakness
By the earths tears
She showed herself she could
Still be strong yet cry at the same time
As the earth cried
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2007-01-02 13:44:50]
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Re: Droplets
(User Rating: 1 )
by ClayMan on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 05:29:23 AM AEST
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| This was heartfelt but i feel you could have expressed yourself in a deeper sense, it felt like you came across well enough but held back in certain parts. A good read nontheless! |
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Re: Droplets
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by CwisssStunnaaa on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 06:03:28 AM AEST
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this is a beautifully written poem
keep up the nice work |
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Re: Droplets
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 02:37:14 PM AEST
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| I loved the emotion that was expressed here. Very deep and wonderful poem! |
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Re: Droplets
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by pooja on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 12:38:37 PM AEST
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In a not so strange way, ur poem stir two very different memories...
It reminds me of the song 'another day in paradise' and the Charlie Chaplin quote "i love walking in the rain, coz no one can see me cry"
Good work, keep it up ! |
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