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give us a chance

Contributed by DeepaliDoshi on Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 01:15:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It seems that everyone is here to only let me down
Be it mom, dad or abhi
Be it shony, shweta, honey or nishant
No one truly cares
No one I can blindly trust

And then I look around
And I see you
I look in your eyes
And I see someone who I can completely trust
Who will never let me down
Never let me shed a tear
Someone who really cares
And wishes for my good
Even though officially you are
Just a friend

I so so badly
Want you to be so much more
I wonder
Why you just can’t be mine
Why can’t I always have your chest
To put my head to rest
Why just why?

It’s so simple
All you have to do
Is ask me to be yours
But I know it’s just a dream
And some dreams never come true

You have no idea
What you are missing out in life
I promise to love more than you can imagine
Never ever let you down
Just give me a chance
A chance to be yours

Don’t complicate things
We are so good together
Why are you looking here and there?
What are you waiting for?
You want to be happy, right?
I swear I will do all in my power
To keep you ever smiling
I feel complete when I am with you
I want to have babies with you
Grow old with you
How I wish you only knew
How strongly I feel
Give us a chance

Are you bothered about what others will say?
How does that matter?
Are they going to come home
To love you, care for you,
Cook for you, clean for you, have babies with you
Most of them are superficial
And the very few ones who care
Will only want to see you happy
And nothing else

I've crossed the line
Between friendship and love
I've fallen deep
But soared high above
These feelings are now too much to hide
I can no longer hold them up inside
I must tell you how I truly feel
Cause I need to know if this is real
too long have I struggled to find the words
To let you know that
I need to be heard
You mean everything and more to me
I know that this must be destiny
I know I must be out of my mind
Now that I have dared to cross the line

Copyright Â© DeepaliDoshi ... [ 2007-01-02 13:15:31]
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Re: give us a chance (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 02:38:31 PM AEST
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very powerful write.. I like the flow and how you expressed your feelings well. It sucks when you really care for someone but your not sure if they will give you a chance.. my suggestion talk to them about it.. awesome job in expression though

vampyress Jenni

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