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This Place Will Make You Blind
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 03:32:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm incredible in my own way
Understood in the wrong way
Wasting my life every day
The years peel back
Covering their mysterious center
Smaller as we go
Watching the world from the outside
Tripping over others
Crawling for a better view
Hoping for footprints to erase in the wind
Hoping to start again
Find my own tracks to follow
Beauty surrounds me
Too bright to notice
This place will make you blind
And I wonder where I will go
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the_story_of_the_year
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2007-01-01 03:32:11]
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Re: This Place Will Make You Blind
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by Crow on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 10:07:20 AM AEST
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| this is a Bad-ass write..I really enjoyed this..Crow |
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Re: This Place Will Make You Blind
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 03:39:50 PM AEST
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I must agree this rocked..... you will find your own way.....
~Michelle~ |
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Re: This Place Will Make You Blind
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 04:04:05 PM AEST
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Yes well said, and we all feel like this sometime.Sue x
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Re: This Place Will Make You Blind
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 07:00:00 PM AEST
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This is beautiful..Well written..
Excellent...
honey56
Happy New Year! |
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Re: This Place Will Make You Blind
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 07:34:37 PM AEST
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I agree with all above,
this is a awesome flow. |
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