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Warped
Contributed by
sunflower
on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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only
the elegant trees,
could offer such beauty,
as they sit gracefully
on their branches,
only
the open skies,
could relinquish
space enough,
for their
glorious free flight,
only
the bottomless ocean,
moved by the loving moon,
could be the inspiration
as their guiding light,
calling them home
from the darkness,
only
a warped boy
like you,
that awakened
a warped girl
like me,
from the deepest of sleep,
could echo
their presence
as they fly by,
and touch,
in my most
sacred of spots
Copyright ©
sunflower
... [
2003-02-20 03:00:00]
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Re: Warped
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 08:39:40 AM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL!! and nicely written! |
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Re: Warped
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 09:28:55 AM AEST
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| Aaahhh yes! very very nicely written. Lovely. |
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Re: Warped
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by Keatsdogg on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 08:03:52 PM AEST
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| good use of concrete imagery. Most importantly, the poem flows, which I believe is very important for a poem, its ability to flow like honey. |
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Re: Warped
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 02:56:32 PM AEST
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This flowed beautifully beautiful imagery and beautiful written. Perhaps it was beautiful? Great write I'll be looking for more from you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Warped
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by Spirit_Dancer on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 10:55:29 AM AEST
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| What a beautiful write...sounds almost like pillow talk....Very sweet, and tender! :o))) God Bless!!! |
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