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Silent survival
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 11:53:18 PM in AEST
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I talk
but no one listens
I leave
no one says good bye,
I have no shadow
I'm just another face
in the crowd
passing by.
I lay awake at night
and in the day
I search
for something to believe
cause I know
all the sighing
and silent crying
is all for nothing
if I
don't break free.
My soul
ebbs and flows
as my essence
slowly
starts to fade....
I exsist
in chaos and confusion
everyday
something goes wrong,
it's such a struggle
to find the reasons
to go on.
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unknown_utopia
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Re: Silent survival
(User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 12:46:16 AM AEST
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I was listening to a song tonight, this write reminded of it...lyrics.
wish we could talk,
somehow we never do
don`t even ask me how my day has been
looks like one of those evenings again
we sit here like strangers
I don`t know you anymore..
"I knew you when" you needed me...
lyrics by..Oleta Adams.
good write, ..Crow
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Re: Silent survival
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 04:57:35 PM AEST
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Sad and heart wrenching write, just the kind of poem I like to answer, Please do not be offended, its just a thought. Your poem is very good, well done. Sue x
But go on you must,
And weather the storm,
For one day you will find,
A new chapter is born,
You won't feel so distant,
You will at last belong,
For faith in yourself,
Will move you along. |
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Re: Silent survival
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 03:43:35 AM AEST
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It's a mad world out there friend but u know u gots me.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Silent survival
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 10:46:29 PM AEST
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Hmm tough subject with excellent composition and highly confessional. From your first post to this there is a theme of Invisibility that captures both H.G. Wells and Ralph Ellison's take.
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Silent survival
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 07:36:09 PM AEST
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| Emotional. I liked it. Nicely done. |
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Re: Silent survival
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by lostrelic on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 03:43:23 AM AEST
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as my essence
slowly
starts to fade
words that exist in every sentence i say
your words speak to me in ways i cant yet understand let there be more |
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