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The Fallen Knight
Contributed by
Unholy_Soldier
on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Suicide is the key,
I taste the barrel to unlock my eturnity,
Look at me,
I want you to see what life has done to me,
Now the bullet chews threw my teeth as they grind,
Please forgive a simple mind,
I only wanted a way to hide,
The pain I held deep inside,
Look at me,
Suicide was the key,
To free the pain from me.
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Unholy_Soldier
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2003-02-20 02:00:00]
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Re: The Fallen Knight
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by exiled on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 05:56:36 PM AEST
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hey man,
i remeber this, it's an oldie.
still love it though.
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Re: The Fallen Knight
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by Unholy_Soldier on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 04:58:28 AM AEST
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| I should not just grant you the ability to see it. Altho you were the first to preview my work. Thanks for all the support and finding this great page. |
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Re: The Fallen Knight
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 11:38:22 AM AEST
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| very desriptive...very well written...and i know what you're talking about.. you are a very good writer! |
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Re: The Fallen Knight
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by cryingonmyporch on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 12:41:14 AM AEST
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I likd it very nice!
Amy |
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Re: The Fallen Knight
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by angelrae on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 03:55:45 PM AEST
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| very enlightening write. One does not need to be a soldier to feel this pain. Thank you, |
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Re: The Fallen Knight
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by angelrae on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 03:55:48 PM AEST
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| very enlightening write. One does not need to be a soldier to feel this pain. Thank you, |
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