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Artists
Contributed by
silvermercury
on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 07:35:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Artists
are
biologists; studying the life around them.
to learn ways not seen by normal sights.
Tireless beings
surveying movement
around them.
they are not afraid
to sit in front a mirror
to study how realism
fits their physical
learners; grasping the heart of technique
Tireless beings
awed
like a cat
and
a butterfly.
jumping from its stump
again and again
failing to capture
the creature
until
it’s hind legs breaches flight
to feel the flutter of fly
philosophers; curious with interest
awed by the odd
asking
why
until
excepting
wondering, so learning
until learned
Inspires; for other to have
interest
in the technique
to learn
and
study
Inspired; have interest
and
create greatness
majestic
beings
are the
cat and the fly
sharers; to teach the one without sights
until learned to study
the technique
of movement
life
sharing studied
what was learned
to study
life
You and I; alike with the mind
different from others.
I was
until you were taught
by the learned
to see
movement
until the cat
who
touched the
fly
You and I
hands that are skilled
Artists
Copyright ©
silvermercury
... [
2006-12-30 19:35:11]
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Re: Artists
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 09:23:17 PM AEST
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WOW, I AM AN ARTIST! THANK YOU & ONE LAST, WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT JOB!
~Me |
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Re: Artists
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by oreo_kisses on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 01:16:27 AM AEST
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| very good keep it up |
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Re: Artists
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 01:03:18 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this as well and found myself saying this a few times aloud and in my head:
"...awed by the odd..."
Good Job
Peace
Yangdantien |
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