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Out Of Luck...?
Contributed by
broken_not_beautiful
on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 06:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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well here we are
we just ran out of luck
and now your telling me
how you dont give a *****
so now whats gonna happen?
is this really real?
im feeling all the things
you swore id never feel
the feeling of the forgotten
the feeling of lost love
if its lost then come and find me
this isnt the ending ive dreamed of
press rewind and see it all
here comes the rise
there goes the fall
but exactly when
did it all fall apart?
was it before or after
you stole my heart?
im told not to worry
it will all work out fine
lets stop with the replay
im so sick of that line
tell me straight up
dont drag this all out
im sure breaking hearts
is what your all about
too bad you cant break me
so sorry to ruin your fun
im already heavily broken
so go ahead and run
if you want this to work
you should act like you care
or one day youll wake up
and i just wont be there
you werent something i wanted
no. you were a need.
you never understood me
but i was easy to read
i tried to tell you without words
how much you meant to me
but when i looked you in the eyes
you just never seemed to see
so save this love
and youll save me too
lets keep this thing going
and make something new
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2006-12-30 18:11:03]
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Re: Out Of Luck...?
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by RandyBabyx3 on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 06:15:20 PM AEST
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Kailee...
Its sooo good. Whats up with josh? or is this one not about josh? Well whatever it is i hope it works out. Great poem, like usual. I mean you are soo good at this. LOL.
I love youuuuuu ♥
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Re: Out Of Luck...?
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by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 12:15:01 AM AEST
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Great write. I can relate.
Unknown to myself
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