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Take Your Place
Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 04:23:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If you know me
sleep among wolves,
winds dance around
modern stone.. aged, broken.
Two-thousand" glimpse
some worried, some worn,
lay by my side.. dream along.
Up from the shadows
linger to long
fathers are prophets
gather what`s yours.
Solitary ending
please take your place"
room without view
sterile numbers.
Bury me twice"
let me be me
if I rise...Vincent
Copyright ©
crow
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2006-12-30 16:23:38]
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Re: Take Your Place
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 07:57:40 PM AEST
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abstract doesn't even do this justice. I love the depth of it.
Michelle |
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Re: Take Your Place
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 03:13:41 PM AEST
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| how do you come up with stuff like this? this is great. I am forced to read it again and again..peeling off layers. |
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Re: Take Your Place
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 10:08:31 PM AEST
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Crow, I liked the style of this. The intenseness that was laid out. Great write....I'm with Mary. It made me want to read and read again.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Take Your Place
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by Crow on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 12:07:13 AM AEST
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| thank you girls for reading me, if you have a question, just ask...Crow |
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Re: Take Your Place
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 12:09:19 AM AEST
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| I like the way this flows too |
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