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Contributed by blindchoice on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:12:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



You’ll never know
What I do in my room alone
I come out maybe twice a day
Then I go back to my room to stay
To do nothing but bleed and cry
Just so I can feel alive
This is not what I want to be
But nothing can ever be as it seems
You treat him like *****
I can’t take it any longer this is it
I plug in the cord in the wall
I never felt like I was alive at all
The music blares from my heart
As I tear myself apart
Im dead alone
But you’ll never know
Because you never come to my room
And you never thought I’d go this soon
So when you do find me
You’ll understand what I see
Monsters and goblins flow from your heart
So I tore mine apart
Give all my things away
But my heart will always stay
You’ll take back what you said
Tonight as you lie in bed
We survived the move and the rest
But it was never like you said for the best
Don’t think it’s your fault because it’s not
This is just like I thought
It ended all so wrong
But I knew it would all along
So tell all my friends
Im sorry that it had to end
I love you all very much
But I just felt like I could never touch
Any of your hearts
So I tore mine apart
Thank you all for all you have done
But I had to pull the trigger on the gun
It’s all gone and to an end
By my love ill always send
I can’t say much more
Because I hear someone knocking on my door
I turn the knob to open it up
I never thought enough
I take the bony in mine
And wave goodbye to time
I choke on air
As im strangled by my hair
I float away on the flames
Nothing will ever be the same
You’ll never set foot in my room again
And you'll never speak to any of my friends
I hurried to fast
And I knew time would never last
So kiss my lips on last time
And promise you'll be mine
Once again im home
And im in my room alone




Copyright © blindchoice ... [ 2006-12-30 12:12:17]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Metikulus on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 04:06:22 PM AEST
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I aint no suicidealist but baby listen i just wanna tell you this, life is too short for you to be dealin with this, dont let nobody bring you down, flip up that smile i dont wanna see you frown, you better come out your room and look around, it wasnt God's plan to see you drown, in a pool of your own blood, one day you will find true love, trust me i mean it, i know too many people i've seen it, i just want you to make the right choice, let everything go thats bothering you and hear my voice, no dilemma in this world should be strong enough to bring you to an end, to keep you couped up in your room to the point you bend, I hope i have a strong message that hits you once i hit send!




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