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My Shoes
Contributed by
DrowningHeart
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Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 11:07:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My Shoes
She wanders the streets
without looking back.
Footsteps will fade,
but the past will remain.
They will stop to admire.
Can they see she's in pain?
The soles of her shoes
worn, barely gone.
This journey of hers
will it come to an end?
Copyright ©
DrowningHeart
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2006-12-30 11:07:03]
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Re: My Shoes
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 12:37:22 PM AEST
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Deep poem... Sad yet a will to keep going... Great poem...
Take care
Christina |
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Re: My Shoes
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by CuriousitysCat on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 06:32:00 PM AEST
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Short and sweet, right on. It packed a bit of a punch and to the question at the end, well it's all about your point of view and the objectives you hold or don't...[i think]
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~ThEnD |
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Re: My Shoes
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by Drapes on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 06:31:16 PM AEST
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Oh I loved this! Sets the mood, just a great write!
-drapes |
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Re: My Shoes
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 03:09:44 PM AEST
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| I can hear those feet dragging a bit....I hope her head is held high.....learning can be so darn painful....good write |
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Re: My Shoes
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 12:24:22 PM AEST
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Again, beautiful. Sadness can bring words to you that you never knew you had, a great foe, but an ally nontheless.
May your sorrow fade, stay strong.
Take care,
David |
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