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SUICIDE BOMBER
Contributed by
wellsmark
on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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SUICIDE BOMBER
Eyes see all folk pass me by,
Smiles, crying, people waiting in doors.
I myself was adhered to a box,
Detonators, explosives in a wooden block,
All set to go off at half past four.
I scorned the rat race it was a roundabout,
Engine noise too much to shout about.
Public everyday rushing home,
Just like the day before.
This time they wont have to I have my box,
I can almost here the timer tick-tock,
Half past four to settle a score.
Strutting into the tube station Allah understood,
He believed like me this was just it was good.
It was almost half past four.
Tick-tock stops from the deadly box,
I clasp the package that I wore.
Explosion everywhere, death was not pretty,
The full impact decimated and tore.
So my end I am immortal now,
Papers blame our network somehow.
Others will open the deadly box of war,
Spilling more crimson across the floor.
Children crying people dying,
From a small but lethal box of war.
Copyright ©
wellsmark
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2003-02-20 01:00:00]
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Re: SUICIDE BOMBER
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 08:32:04 AM AEST
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| compelling... how vivid and interesting to see from the other point of view... and, i think you have probably displayed accurately what a suicide bomber thinks... i love the last two lines... |
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Re: SUICIDE BOMBER
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 02:52:51 PM AEST
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Very vivid indeed compelling and interesting. You keep sort of neutral view not saying whether suicide bombing is ok or not. A good way to keep your head intact.
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