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Both Your Hands
Contributed by
carmen
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Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I never thought I’d meet someone like this
Someone I knew was wrong but couldn’t resist
You’re not much of a man
Too much of a boy
My ego you couldn’t break
But my heart you did destroy
How I let that happen, I don’t know
I was too afraid to love you
Even more afraid to let you go
Too wrapped up in what I thought I had found
Never acknowledging every day you had let me down
Now I lay awake
And contemplate my next mistake
Sinking in the sands
With my heart wrapped tightly
In both your hands
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carmen
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2003-02-20 00:40:00]
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Re: Both Your Hands
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 06:56:34 PM AEST
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| Dear Carmen, I think this is an excellent descriptive writing, seems to have alot of insight into the weaknesses of the relationship. |
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Re: Both Your Hands
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by Carmen on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 12:36:40 PM AEST
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| Thank you Bizzy for taking the time to read my poem, and I apreciate your coment. I know all the weaknesses the biggest being his girl friend and his lieing, I was told it was over and found out it wasn't. and now I keep my hands to myself |
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