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Forever Came Too Quickly
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 04:44:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You said you'd love me forever
And be mine for all eternity
And you were mine,
For three years' time
A very short infinity.
It's always been my understanding
That forever is a very long time
But if you ask me
It seems to be
Your definition differs from mine.
I can't live forever without you
To gaze alone at the moon
But if the past three years
Are any guide
Forever should end pretty soon.
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sir_odd87
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2006-12-29 16:44:40]
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Re: Forever Came Too Quickly
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by Metikulus on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 05:27:36 PM AEST
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| i like this poem...but dont dwell on the past its not good...you cant change what happens...you can only move forward with your life |
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Re: Forever Came Too Quickly
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by RandyBabyx3 on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 06:32:24 PM AEST
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Good write. Its meaningful. I hope everything works out. It was obviously not meant to be.
♥Miranda |
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Re: Forever Came Too Quickly
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 01:10:46 AM AEST
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Though it is hard at times gazing at the moon alone it can give the soul quiet reflections. Poetry is many things to different people. The air to this is soft tinted with shades of blue. I hope all works out for you and you find the enternity you so desire.
~Michelle~ |
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