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Single Red Rose
Contributed by
Oreo_kisses
on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 03:56:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A Vase Lies empty
For a year
Eagerly waiting
Upon its week
For the one
Fair single red rose
That gets placed in its grasp
For when its week is up
Knowing there was something
That meant more
Than any amount of money
That no amount
Of money could replace
The meaning
Of that one single red rose
Placed in this world
By our lord
It will be one thing
That the person
It was given to
Would never forget
The meaning maybe
Never topped
This feeling
Could never be replaced
By any money
The memories
May never be replaced
By anything else
The vase may hold
One of the most precious
Items known to anyone
With greater value than
Any other object
Could possibly
With its precious job
Nothing could possibly beat it
But one thing
One thing could have a better job
That would be
The one fair single red rose.
Copyright ©
Oreo_kisses
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Re: Single Red Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 06:30:58 PM AEST (User
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breathtaking
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Re: Single Red Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 09:12:43 PM AEST (User
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What a beautiful story.
Very imaginative writing my friend
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Single Red Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 01:15:10 AM AEST (User
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Pretty write. Thus nothing finer than that beautiful red rose.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Single Red Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by silver_crested_shadow on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 10:04:16 AM AEST (User
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great write, deep. loved it |
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