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baby, baby
Contributed by
lyddie
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Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 01:54:11 PM in AEST
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Im remembering
when you just up and left me!
i wish i would have
been there to say to you
"baby, baby pleas dont leave
ill do anything to keep
you right here with me!
cant you see how mush i need you!"
im hopeless without you
you are my world you treated
me like an angel!
by:Lydia Badgwell
Copyright ©
lyddie
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2006-12-29 13:54:11]
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Re: baby, baby
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by oreo_kisses on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 04:09:46 PM AEST
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| its really good but i feel maybe you cut it too short.... maybe you could possibly add something more too it... but keep up the good work |
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Re: baby, baby
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by roy on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 01:31:32 AM AEST
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| do you really mean that baby |
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Re: baby, baby
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by lost_chadow on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 12:19:43 PM AEST
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| Hm, I tend to look at breakups as more opportunites instead of catastrophes. You're too young to thow your whole life on one person, especially another young person who can't handle it. Just puttin in my bit. Hi, Lyd! |
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Re: baby, baby
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 09:30:58 AM AEST
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A lucky guy indeed. I am not sure if a play on words or mistype either way it plays lyrically in my head.
Peace
Yang |
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Re: baby, baby
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by babygirlholly on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 11:49:42 PM AEST
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| just a waste of time.i hope u know u arent going to get those feelings in return. :) |
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