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Insomnia’s Mood
Contributed by
books_4gal
on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 08:09:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Peaceful slumber escapes me,
Wracked with thoughts of death,
The mind seeks a place to rest,
Dreams offer no respite.
Sleep I crave, yet I flee,
Between each heart beat and breath,
I sense I ride upon the wave’s crest,
Seeing gentle sleep just in sight.
Pacing, sighing as the hours pass,
Driven by compulsion to reflect,
Emotionless and weary,
Life seems such a burdensome gift
The mirror becomes more than a looking glass,
The inner turmoil is suspect,
Solutions come but can’t be hurried,
Sleep will come when eyelids no longer lift.
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2006-12-28 20:09:09]
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Re: Insomnia’s Mood
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by shelby on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 12:29:44 AM AEST
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This write flowed and spoke volumes darn sleep robbers lol. Hope you get some good sleep. Great write.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Insomnia’s Mood
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by Janet on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 04:40:21 AM AEST
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I suffer along with you most nights. Good write!
Janet |
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Re: Insomnia’s Mood
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by zenith66 on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 02:43:43 PM AEST
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Hey i sail the same sleepless ship as you many nights, it really is a fantastically written poem, youve captured that unreal feeling of insomnia with ease and perfection...
Exellent!!!
zenith66
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