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Soul Guardian
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 07:10:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I'm creeping
as you are sleeping
I'm wanting
to touch you,
fascination flows
as I
slip into your room....
I watch you
as you are dreaming
I taste your essence
and it's
oh
so beautiful.
Floorboards creaking
shadows dancing
you open your eyes
and I
fade from view.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2006-12-28 19:10:39]
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Re: Soul Guardian
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 07:45:51 AM AEST
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I have many times opened my eyes and the guardian didn't fade from view and I learned some things I never thought I knew! Still, this poem hit home.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Soul Guardian
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 03:48:13 AM AEST
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So that was u naughty boy.
Very beautifull.
Big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Soul Guardian
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 10:41:26 PM AEST
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Song of the ethereal one...it dances on double en tenders but delivers us from evil...
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Soul Guardian
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 05:26:19 AM AEST
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| Damn dude, this was really good, what a grand entrance to YPDC! |
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Re: Soul Guardian
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 03:48:22 PM AEST
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kind of creepy tho also has a romantic feel to it,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Soul Guardian
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 24th February 2019 @ 09:15:57 PM AEST
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So this is how it all started????
This was creepy good and the visuals amazing.
That/'/s why I hate old houses.....lol
Those dang creaking floors :)
Awesome entrance buddy !!!
JS. |
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