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broken
Contributed by
blossomingcherry5353
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Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 01:57:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Can you feel the sadness flowing behind her eyes.
Giving out false happiness to tame the beast inside.
One more promise broken, her dam finally brakes.
Emotions let out, as if they are trying to win a race.
Will she Cry?
Die inside?
Wondering if she's the reason.
No one loves me.
That's not hard to see.
Now everyone can see as the stand and watch me bleed.
No one utters a sound as they peer at the mess.
Not blood, or tears.
Just a girl with her heart ripped out of her chest.
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blossomingcherry5353
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2006-12-28 13:57:41]
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Re: broken
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by BOZEEN on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 03:24:14 PM AEST
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| THAT WAS GOOD BUT NEXT TIME LOOK OVER YOUR SPELLING TO MAKE SURE IT'S CORRECT AND YOUR WORDING TO SEE IF YOUR USING THE RIGHT WORDS. |
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Re: broken
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 07:21:26 PM AEST
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Deep InnerVision
well done |
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