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These Aching Bones

Contributed by moses on Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 01:23:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I could paint a perfect picture
or write a perfect ending,
but these wounds would still be here
and they need some mending.

It's so funny that the sun shows itslelf now.
The Loneliness penetrates the cold.

An empty hand holds a cigarette,
I just need to know, how do I find my soul?

Because for goodness sake
I'm about to break
with my aching bones
I am waiting all alone,
waiting for you to come home.

I never thought it'd be so simple,
it's all just complicated.

It's such a strange sight
to see you tainted.
Now the pictures on my walls are faded.

While lying down, staring at the ceiling
I realize everything and nothing has changed
and I'm still estranged.

Now for goodness sake
I'm about to break
with these aching bones
I'm waiting all alone,
just waiting for you to come home.

What kind of twisted world can this be
Where my life is surrounded by death
and I love soaking in the misery?

How I love the feeling of still dreaming
but it isn't getting any easier
and my vision just isn't that clear.

Can you hear the darkness,
brewing in my heart?
Tell me softly before I become a victim to my own art.

Oh, For Goodness Sake,
I'm about to break
with these aching bones
I am waiting all alone,
yes I am waiting for you to come on home.

Copyright © moses ... [ 2006-12-28 13:23:22]
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Re: These Aching Bones (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 11:35:01 PM AEST
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Sounds like a good country song..I enjoyed it.
Mary

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