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Fuel
Contributed by
trixxx
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Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 09:21:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The clock stares and flares
and stares and flares
I grow angry at its constancy
guilt drags me and hates me
but wonder stays me...
the depressant is the suppressant
fuel the excuse
the fuel burns...
Reality stands far from me
But watches me with accusing eyes
Forever the digestion includes the question...
Am I burning the fuel, or is the fuel burning me?
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2006-12-28 09:21:40]
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Re: Fuel
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by laydeeluck on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 11:29:31 AM AEST
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| how true...how true....my name is alisha laydeeluck user name....check my poem out called a little feelin also about addiction....if your a man who attends meetings...you may even understand it.....tc |
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Re: Fuel
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by laydeeluck on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 11:31:08 AM AEST
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| just seeing if you got my first comment new here not sure if im doing things right lol |
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Re: Fuel
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 07:31:24 PM AEST
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I like the way this flows
good topic
well done... |
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Re: Fuel
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 08:45:51 AM AEST
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This was a good poem.. Well written... Addictions can be a b*tch...
Take care
Christina |
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