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Devoted
Contributed by
SopLea
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Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I sit, I stand, I reminisce,
Recall the summer of our first kiss,
The time we had, the time now gone,
My love for you is still so strong,
The place, the time, it felt so right,
Through darkness you were my guiding light!
But now you’re gone my heart just bleeds,
The rose of love has mislaid its seeds,
My heart is in chains and will never let go,
From the person I love, cherish and know,
I wish you new my feelings inside,
And the love that I felt would not be denied!
By Liane and Louise age 14
Copyright ©
SopLea
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2003-02-19 21:40:00]
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Re: Devoted
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by Lone_er on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 09:57:56 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem. Keep your chins up and keep writing.
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Re: Devoted
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 11:07:53 PM AEST
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You both write well together,hang in there!
Keep writing! Christina |
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