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quicksand of hope
Contributed by
riverofwords
on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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i trusted you best friend
you cast that friendship
with betrayal into the garbage
my partner ,my lover ,my all
you changed that love
from an oasis to a desert
work colleagues
you wear two faces
one showing friendship and trust
other was like i was dust
family of mine
you showed your mettle
in my hardest of times
cast out like leper
when i needed you most
man of god when i turned to you
you with no time
cause you were late for a meal
strong drink and the pills you are my comfort now
you will ease all my worry and woe
the silence of death will comfort me now
life is a quicksand that sucks you down
when you reach the bottom there is only
one way to go
but then you came without even a thought
strong arms wrapped around me so gentle and kind
god my only true friend
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2003-02-19 21:20:00]
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Re: quicksand of hope
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 12:52:03 AM AEST
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| It is interesting..ending lines are quite refreshing.. venkat |
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Re: quicksand of hope
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:56:33 AM AEST
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Well now that was deep, but oh so true, the riverofwords, has taken me in this is indeed a poetic masterpiece.
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