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Dare I love you
Contributed by
goodandevil
on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 11:14:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You ask my advice
Questions on life
You seem so confused
Neglected, abused
You seek out the one
Wanting to run
You reach for my hand
Timid, unplanned
You don’t comprehend
We’re only friends
You’re feeling betrayed
Lonesome, afraid
You stare into my eyes
melting my disguise
You know its taboo
If we see it through
Hiding what is true
Dare I love you?
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2006-12-26 23:14:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dare I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by ArezzoSunrise on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 12:32:02 AM AEST (User
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It is very simple and that is its strength. With so few words I know my interpretation is prob different that what you wrote it as, but I can relate to it.Very nice!!! |
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Re: Dare I love you
(User Rating: 1 ) by jada on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 01:41:31 AM AEST (User
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i know exactly what youre talking about going throught that right now this a a great poem good job |
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