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NO love
Contributed by
metalguitarist
on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:04:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Please tell me
Is it supposed to be like this
Am I supposed to be shot
While you get a miss
I chased you day after day
I cried to myself watching you in the play
I cant believe this is happening to me
Im cutting over a girl that has no love for me
You tell me you love me as a friend but thats not enough
I want it to be more because this life is so rough
Its killing me inside to know youll never love me
I want it to end like in a loving movie
Ill take your hand and carry you away
Ill hold you close and tell you life is ok
Ill kiss you slowly and cherish every chill
I wish this all would happen
But i know it never will
Copyright ©
metalguitarist
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2006-12-26 22:04:32]
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Re: NO love
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by books_4gal on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:25:14 PM AEST
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Having experienced this, one can never forget the inner torment. You captured that element in my opinion.
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Re: NO love
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by random_kisses_xoxo on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:39:38 PM AEST
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that seriously is so beautifuly gorgeous! i love this poem kyle!!!! it soo sweet and still very sad !!!
love, KAILEEE DUHHH lol |
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Re: NO love
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by random_kisses_xoxo on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:39:45 PM AEST
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that seriously is so beautifuly gorgeous! i love this poem kyle!!!! it soo sweet and still very sad !!!
love, KAILEEE DUHHH lol |
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Re: NO love
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by random_kisses_xoxo on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:39:45 PM AEST
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that seriously is so beautifuly gorgeous! i love this poem kyle!!!! it soo sweet and still very sad !!!
love, KAILEEE DUHHH lol |
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Re: NO love
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by Epic on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 02:22:29 AM AEST
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| i figure people already told you this, but cheer up man i'm sure you'll find another great person.. great write... |
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Re: NO love
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by RandyBabyx3 on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 12:12:58 PM AEST
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oh my goodness kyle. Im not even gonna ask ohkay. But really i love this poem verryyy good. Glad you have a ypdc nowww. This is really sad ohkay & i know its true. I love you.
♥Miranda |
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