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Streaming Consciousness
Contributed by
yangdantien
on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 09:34:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Molly Blooms
lover
eats seed cake
out of her mouth
while lying
among rhododendrons...
Jump from Joyce
to news alerts:
"Marines charged in Iraqi civilian deaths.
Colorado blizzard strands thousands.
Condie Rice: Iraq worth investment in Lives & Dollars!
British charge man in gruesome prostitute murders.
Lawmaker stands firm on Quran criticism.
Iraqi politicians try to forge coalition.
The Donald and Rosie O'Donnel in a Celebrity Deathmatch.
Gorilla on fertility drug gives birth.
Study: Teens abuse all sorts of medicines to get high!
Someone tossed a cat corpse through a drive-thru.
Echo from the end of a dolphin species..."
More on that story please:
"The Christian Science Monitor
reports:
The Baiji, a freshwater dolphin,
which has used sonar to find fish
in China's Yangtze River
for some 20 million years.
Last week, scientists declared it basically extinct.
Can the end of a nearly blind cetacean,
help humans see the need
for greater species conservation? "
Loss brews an
elixir of loving,
to share
out of deep need,
as life's journey
filled with return,
mixes,
a hearts potion
to be administered
by ear
with authority.
AJPIII
Copyright ©
yangdantien
... [
2006-12-26 21:34:51]
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Re: Streaming Consciousness
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 12:13:42 AM AEST
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I loved the entire write but the ending wow I love your wording. Once again your thought and poetic talent blow me away my friend.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Streaming Consciousness
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 12:18:45 AM AEST
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something to think about ...we humans need to start walking softer on the earth for the sake of all
Shari |
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Re: Streaming Consciousness
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 04:39:34 PM AEST
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I hear ya' & raise my bottle of love potion #9 to, Mother Earth!!! May we all hear her crys & find a way to comfort her for what we have done...
~Kerry Lynne Listenin' |
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Re: Streaming Consciousness
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 08:36:31 AM AEST
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Amazing.. Great poem.. I liked everything about it... Thank you for the comment on my poem An Ounce..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Streaming Consciousness
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 06:31:12 PM AEST
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You're a true poetic master highly skilled in poetic verse. I love your writes and the depths and journeys you take me on through your amazing work. Always a pleasure venturing ur pages my dear friend.
Mother Earth smiles down on her sweet son.
Shine on AJ~
love n hugs from ur aussie mate,
Sue M |
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Re: Streaming Consciousness
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by CuriousitysCat on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 07:05:33 PM AEST
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I was into this, I had wanted to read it for a while but never really came round[always something else seemed to catch my eye]. Anywho it proved a very worthy experience. Hmmm, who knew? A stream of consciousness from within could run parallel to many other's thoughts?
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~ThEnD |
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Re: Streaming Consciousness
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 03:35:53 PM AEST
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Great work on this piece --- potent --- and the layout is not only creative, but very, very effective. The ending stings, and demands contemplation.
~Scorp. |
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