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garden of dreams
Contributed by
vikingbrokk
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Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 02:36:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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in the garden of my dreams
flowers bloom
and die
there is a girl
who spins and dances
underneath a twilight sky
light as a feather
she moves with ease
tender as a morning cobweb
oblivious to my presense...
such is the nature
of the shapes
of things to come
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2006-12-25 14:36:40]
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Re: garden of dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 02:51:09 PM AEST
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| A beautiful poem, I really like it. Something magical in it... :) |
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Re: garden of dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 06:01:34 PM AEST
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By reading this, it made me feel something flowing in my body.
It is so Nice, beautiful. Made me think of a long lost hope.
Very Well Written. I really enjoyed it. So perfect.
We all when in love, think of a place like this. It makes us let imagination go, to places in which we see everything so nice and eternal.
And sometimes our love is possible, or impossible, but in that time, we just love.
Don't think of what bad will come, only think
in the good, we have a hope, a wish for
being with the other person, and that makes us also think of her/him as The most precious being in the world, in our dreams.
Nice Write. |
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