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Dance the Ages
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Sunday, 24th December 2006 @ 11:53:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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~Merry Christmas~
When we are very strong, who pulls back..
when vulnerable, who cares for ridicule?
and when we are very bad,
what would they do with us?
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..an overcast morning in December
and a taste of ashes flies through the air-
an odor of sweating wood on neighboring fires,
though the devestated flowers, now long forgotten,
still dance in the mist over the back-fields;
..why not incense and toys already?
Deck yourself.. dance and laugh.
I could never throw love out the window.
I have adorned, from steeple to steeple,
the laurel and ribbon of my faith;
garland from branch to branch
and gold from star to star..
and I dance..
I dance the dance of ages.
B.. Christmas - 2006
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Re: Dance the Ages
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by sweetdreamsaremadeofthis on
Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 12:39:54 PM AEST
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| Interesting. Very cool write! :) |
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Re: Dance the Ages
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by shelby on
Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 08:42:20 PM AEST
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Oh Billy so tender and beautiful.
Merry Christmas to you
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Dance the Ages
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 11:04:19 PM AEST
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yes beautiful and tender love it.
hugs |
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Re: Dance the Ages
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by wizard on
Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 11:19:59 PM AEST
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nicely done bro...the final stanza is awesome!
wiz |
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Re: Dance the Ages
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 05:27:58 PM AEST
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Oh my sweetest heart and dear poet,
This is utterly beautiful. So soft and delicate,
like an angel's wings, hun.
Gorgeous your words and so completely
unassuming .. as are you~
A reflection of pure and true art, sweets.
The intro brings a profoundness to the piece
that gives the words that follow so much more
meaning. I love this!!
ever yours~
~Breezy
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Re: Dance the Ages
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 09:08:48 PM AEST
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Hey there, Billy.
Good write you have here. I apologise for how long it has been since I commented, but I'm back now, and as usual, you do not disappoint.
I, like others, love that last stanza and last line.
Well done, my friend.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Dance the Ages
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 04:42:17 PM AEST
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Billy as you already know I love this beautiful write of yours my dear friend and I wanted so much to leave you a comment on it here too.Your wonderful piece of poetry brings the joyous and festive season back to life my dear friend~ Soft and delicate your words dance into your readers mind.
Many poets come & go and they leave a mark on us, but you my dear POEt friend will leave a mark within our poetic hearts that will last a lifetime. You are truly amazing and I would like to thank you for being the wonderful poet & beautiful person that you are~
with love n hugs from ur devoted fan/friend from across the blue~
sue m |
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Re: Dance the Ages
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 01:09:32 AM AEST
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This one is just down right heavenly.
I can see my tarzan well never mind this is a sensored site soooooo.
Thanks for triggering some heavenly memories.
big happy huggs,
emy |
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Re: Dance the Ages
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 04:35:05 AM AEST
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FRAUD!!!!!!!!!!!!! again with Rimbaud! Man this guy's corpse isn't rolling it's looking to kill you!
RIMBAUD [www.keaggy.com] |
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