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[[Picture Perfect]]
Contributed by
The_Unknown
on
Sunday, 24th December 2006 @ 03:30:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So perfectly they seem
Together
In the distance
Both so beautiful
Under the stars
As if it were picture perfect
As if they'd come from the sceen of a movie
The music plays to its own beat
As they run around
Holding hands
Smiling
And laughing
Picks her up
In his arms
Carrying her
Spinning around
Kisses her under the stars
So beautiful
The sceen
So perfectly in love
You can tell from a distance
Younge and in love
Laughing and smiling
Picture perfect couple
So deeply in love
You can tell from a distance
It's amazing to see
This perfect couple
Together
It's what a lot of people want
To be deeply in love
Dance around
Kiss in the rain
Hold hands and laugh
Have it seem as if from a movie
Being picked up
And whirled around
Seems so perfect
You can almost hear the music
Its almost surreal
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The_Unknown
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2006-12-24 03:30:09]
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Re: [[Picture Perfect]]
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by ruthy on
Sunday, 24th December 2006 @ 09:31:05 AM AEST
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this is totally brilliant!!!
well done!
I Loved it
happy xmas
ruthy xX |
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Re: [[Picture Perfect]]
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 24th December 2006 @ 08:22:44 PM AEST
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I like it, but more than that, I'm thrilled that you're able to see, feel, appreciate & express it through your words. Right on!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: [[Picture Perfect]]
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by musicXisXlife on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 01:00:55 AM AEST
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| Amazing. I know exactly what youre talking about. Great write. :D |
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