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i guess i never knew you at all
Contributed by
boredoms_burden
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Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 08:51:21 PM in AEST
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i guess i never knew you, and i guess you knew never me
i guess its all that i have to open my eyes and see
and i guess i wasted time to think so much of you
your just another person, with the same old point view
there was nothing special in your eyes, it was all just show
you were everything to me, now your someone i dont even want to know
i knew you werent perfect and had alot of problems just like i do
but i guess you gave in and didnt have the courage to come through
all the kisses and the hugs, late nights, and pillow fights
just another relationship that proves two wrongs dont make a right
but maybe one day i'll find someone that makes me feel the same divinity that i felt when i looked in your eyes
and maybe their eyes will genuine and not full of pride and lies
i hope you the best and i hope you find someone else too
but its time to put to rest the thought of me and you
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Re: i guess i never knew you at all
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 01:14:38 AM AEST
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your frustration really comes through in this poem. Good write!
cheers,
-glass
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Re: i guess i never knew you at all
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by jmakuer on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 04:06:22 PM AEST
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great write, and way to go expressing your feelings, well done, hope ou find whatchu looking for. i will mix in some of my work, which is similar to yours, but just the oposite of it.
here it goes.
it title: my happiness
They say life goes on, but I must disagree
Since the day you went away, I lost my freedom
I got hungry for love, I lusted for more, and my greed grew
The happiness, the joy, and all of the love we shared
Now you are gone, and I am all alone, you walked away
And now, you telling me I have to start all over again
It so hard to do so, when my life was all you
When my happiness was yours and yours was mine
When you are the only one who made me smile
You are the one who I thought of day and night
When you are the one my heart beat for
But I must confess, you are one of a kind
Life without you is hell, and I am losing my mind
I just want to be happy, but I be happy with you
If only I could reverse the time back
I would be on my knees now, for the best and best
My happiness only comes from you, and you
My hart only beats for you and you If you
feel the same way then let's share the butterflies
let's share the happiness and the laughers together
and we shall be one now and forever and ever
and you will be mine and I'll be yours until the end
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Re: i guess i never knew you at all
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by Shaqs_Girl96 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 03:56:22 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is really good. I am in the same situation. Keep your head up |
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