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On War
Contributed by
Muhammadshanazar
on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 08:32:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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The war, and exhibition of human shreds,
A show of skulls, flesh, blood and bones,
A bestial game, turning men into beasts,
And abhorrent spot on the fair forehead,
A dance of death with the exploding,
Music of blasts and thundering of canons,
For fond glories, and vain victories,
For a piece of land or contradicting creed.
A field where aggression pretends righteous,
Where Carnage and Greed the twin sisters,
Always indiscriminate to false or fair,
Ravage about with roaring howls,
Upon the hapless weak innocence,
Who being offended vainly defends.
Oh Man!
Change not the world into inferno,
Forbear patiently the existence,
Of fellows infesting upon the Earth,
Intrude no the limits of liberty,
Fixed to breath with solace and ease,
For tactics are ripe to the culmination,
Slight recklessness might result in havoc,
Leaving behind neither winner nor loser.
Copyright ©
Muhammadshanazar
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2006-12-21 20:32:01]
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Re: On War
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 10:54:14 AM AEST
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Truly a powerful political write, my friend. It speaks volumes of truth. Why can't we realize? I have heard that Bush is planning to send more troops to Iraq.....oh my gosh. Why is war and fighting the only answers we think we have? Powerful piece. I am anguished by the constant violence....and usually as you say for a piece of land (how ashamed we should be for fighting over pieces of our Mother) or in the name of god. Disgusting and disgraceful. Thank you for sharing.
Much peace,
Laura (your sis in this crazy world) |
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Re: On War
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by heba48 on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 01:06:37 PM AEST
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oh my God,
a very touching poem ,i could appreciate that. thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of writing! |
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