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Escaping Memories II
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 07:22:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Into her body crashed~
yet another breaking wave
As her sword with his clashed~
no quarter asked for or gave...
Then with abrupt violence~
down from the heavens poured
A storm by which silenced~
were the screams from her tore...
Lashing winds and water~
having blurred his vision
Had little time bought her~
to make a decision...
One that if her last~
she would not regret making
What had come to past~
she'd not be by forsaking...
Dropping her sword, she dove~
into the dark ocean
Then from behind she drove~
her knife in swift motion...
Down between his shoulders~
'till hilt met with back
His blood by made bolder~
she renewed her attack...
Back out pulling her knife~
to draw across his throat
With his blood away drained life~
as away from her he float...
to be continued... with III, IV, and V.
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Re: Escaping Memories II
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by wizard on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 11:48:32 PM AEST
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a great sequel.. cant wait for the rest!
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Re: Escaping Memories II
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 08:35:01 PM AEST
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I really enjoy your storytellers voice...
I hope you have the next installment ready to post....
Well Done
Peace
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Re: Escaping Memories II
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 06:24:53 AM AEST
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| I read this one first now I must find and read the first one second |
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