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Breaking apart the word L-O-V-E
Contributed by
BrokenSavior
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Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 05:07:32 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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(Viewed from the broken)
L - is for the Lonely who sit and wait for change.
O - is for the Ongoing set of pain.
V - is for the Vain that you feel is a sin.
E - is for Every time you cry when the knive goes deeper in.
(Viewed from the hopeless romantic)
L - is for the Longing to be next to them.
O - is for the Outstanding feelings by just touching them.
V - is for the Vivid thoughts of yesterday.
E - is for the Excitment of seeing them today.
One view seems simple to choose from the two.
But it 's hard when both of them are the same within you.
~The Broken Savior
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2006-12-21 17:07:32]
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Re: Breaking apart the word L-O-V-E
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by gabby521 on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 05:23:05 PM AEST
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I know both feelings all too well.
good write, thanks for sharing
♥ Rachel |
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Re: Breaking apart the word L-O-V-E
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 06:59:04 PM AEST
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Incredible writing, much wisdom to your words.
I'm just curious how you got your pen name.
huggs,
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