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The First Time I Fell
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
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Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 02:30:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A glut of emotion breaks in my voice,
Love was a burden; never my choice,
You were the cross, and one I still bear,
When the weather is rough, or skies blue and fair,
A bolt round my ankle, a chain round my neck,
A gibbering, shivering, complete nervous wreck,
You left me alone, in the dark at night,
Didn’t care that the choices weren’t right,
You never asked, why I was acting strange,
You just took stock, and noticed the change.
I never fell so easily,
As I did that first time you looked at me,
The moonlight was glowing a ghostly white,
No one had ever held me so tight,
And then it was over, in the blink of an eye,
You didn’t say why, you just said goodbye,
To this day I still look out,
And wonder what the end was about,
Why you left me; so led astray,
Why you couldn’t, or wouldn’t stay.
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Ruby2sdy
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2006-12-21 14:30:50]
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Re: The First Time I Fell
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 03:27:53 PM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful write and great choice in words.. I like the last part especially.. great job
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Re: The First Time I Fell
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 11:27:50 AM AEST
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Sometimes I'm not even sure they know why!
Great job on this!! |
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Re: The First Time I Fell
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 09:45:48 PM AEST
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Stupid isn't it? I'll never udnerstand how people can just through precious things away. I just don't get it. How can anyone take love for granted.
A great write as always, Tuesday. I love how you write and how you always make me think.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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