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I'm gonna write you an ode
Contributed by
damien
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Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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No one has ever taken time to think about me,
sit down and write a wonderful poem for me , sure feels nice to know there's someone caring for you,
feels great to know there's someone backing you up too.
Yoiu've always been so thoughtful and considerate,
even though I often tend to be confused and irate,
I know I could'nt be as good a friend to you ,
as you've been to me, even though I strive to.
As a tribuite to your friendship I've been trying to write something spectacular,
but every attempt like this one turns out to be merely mediocre,
One of these days I'm gonna write you an ode,
thats gonna outwiegh all of King Solomons gold.
Till then all I can do is give you my word,
not a single breath from you will ever go unheard.
Copyright ©
damien
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2003-02-19 18:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I'm gonna write you an ode
(User Rating: 1 ) by Heavenangel on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 07:01:07 PM AEST (User
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what a great dedication to your friend,I'm sure
she will write one for you too.
~HeavenAngel~ |
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Re: I'm gonna write you an ode
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 07:12:49 PM AEST (User
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She's already written a great one for me , check out the poems written by IVY. And thanks for the good word.-Damien |
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Re: I'm gonna write you an ode
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ivy on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 07:16:32 AM AEST (User
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great write. loved it. |
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