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Reflection
Contributed by
RLSS
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Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 06:16:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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The clear blue water, shining,
Shows the snake within me.
In the window's polished glass,
The raven soars where I should be.
By the camera's glinting lens,
I glimpse the wolf in wating.
And the mirrors all around,
Catch the desperate fox evading-
Light's dangerous illusion,
My reflection, or delusion?
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RLSS
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2006-12-20 18:16:28]
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Re: Reflection
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by RandyBabyx3 on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 07:08:59 PM AEST
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This is really good. I had to read it twice to completly get it but its really really good. Nice write.
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Re: Reflection
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 08:35:53 PM AEST
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A thought provoking write you have here. I'm so glad I stopped by your pages. I find your work really interesting. You are able to say so much with so little use of words.
I can't wait to read more from you~
Keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
sue m
PS by the way either clouds or reflection would be great to enter into a school contest. The choice in the end is up to you which one you choose. Goodluck :-) |
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Re: Reflection
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by MandiLee on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 08:49:38 PM AEST
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a quick simple yet beautiful poem!
(and thx for the comment on my poem!)
mandi |
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Re: Reflection
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 09:55:50 PM AEST
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I loved the images in this. Nice flow very beautiful.
Michelle |
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Re: Reflection
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by NDean on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 07:34:29 AM AEST
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Very cool poem. Flows excellently. Well done
Nathan |
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Re: Reflection
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by Nirvana12 on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 08:30:46 PM AEST
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| So far these 2 poems that I have read by you have been increadible it would be tough for me to decide so far which one you should enter because they are both so good. I don't like many other peoples poetry but yours blows me away. Keep it up |
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Re: Reflection
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 06:49:14 PM AEST
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| i loved the imagery in this poem! this was an awesome write |
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